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How to write better awards entries

From conducting in-depth interviews to telling the whole story, Sam Russell provides top tips for crafting a compelling narrative that will appeal to awards panels

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14 Apr 2023
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Whether it鈥檚 watching the glitz and glamour of the Oscars on television or attending an industry gala hosted by a mid-tier stand-up comedian doing top-up corporate work, who doesn鈥檛 love an awards ceremony?

As well as the lure of pre-paid wine on the table and chicken wrapped in Parma ham, any awards do also serves as a welcome celebration of 12 months of hard work, progress and achievements. They鈥檙e important, too, especially in our sector. After all, winning a can provide an institution with many tangible benefits. A big win can turn heads in the industry and help attract new students, funding and accreditations.

Before getting to that stage, though, you鈥檝e got an award entry form to navigate. Sometimes they鈥檙e a teasingly open 2,000-word essay, encouraging the squishing together of a sprawling mass of activity, financial reports, student testimonials and cold, hard data 鈥 all of them competing for airtime. Other times the form is broken up into specific questions, so you can鈥檛 hide behind waffle. But whatever form the entry takes, what matters most is how you tell your institution鈥檚 story. Having written so many drafts of award entries that I see tracked changes from senior stakeholders whenever I close my eyes, I can offer some advice:

<榴莲视频>Get a comprehensive recap of the year

The first thing to do before you start writing should be get as many other people involved as possible, then go back through the eligibility period as a group and pick out the best things you鈥檝e done. Take time to analyse what your actions say about your institution. For example, you might want to base an entry around EDI success, but if you鈥檙e struggling to find immediate evidence, then you鈥檙e better off looking at what you have done. As an institution you will have done a lot, and not everything will escape the edit. It鈥檚 up to you, though, to spot patterns across the many individual initiatives.

<榴莲视频>Interview your stakeholders

If you鈥檙e looking to tell a complete story in your entry, then simply asking your key stakeholders to provide some top-line bullet points isn鈥檛 going to cut it. Take the time to schedule a proper interview with them. Go into it with an outsider鈥檚 mentality and ask them questions that force them to really sell you their department, programme or initiative. Then, when you鈥檙e finished, get the whole thing transcribed. Doing this, you鈥檒l find yourself getting not just ideas from them, but direct phrases from these transcripts will find their way into the entry verbatim. After all, they are the ones who are most likely to speak compellingly about the nuances of their work.

<榴莲视频>Tell the whole story, warts and all

After winning big at this year鈥檚 Oscars, best picture winner Everything Everywhere All At Once has a lot going for it, it鈥檚 fair to say. The wins only tell part of the film鈥檚 story, though. This was a labour-of-love movie that took on a market full of franchise tentpoles. The movie was great, sure, but it had a real story. Made on a relatively shoestring budget, the film was put out in the world by a critically adored distributor. There was a diverse cast that included Ke Huy Quan, who played Short Round in Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom. The VFX crew taught themselves to create effects by watching YouTube videos. These parts of the film鈥檚 story aren鈥檛 just interesting morsels 鈥 they鈥檙e all elements that the jury would have considered alongside the product itself.

Scorsese didn鈥檛 win an Oscar for Mean Streets, he won it for The Departed. Leonardo DiCaprio鈥檚 long-running snubbing was undoubtedly a factor in the judging of his winning best actor in The Revenant, as was the fact that the well-reported shoot for the movie apparently put him through hell. Stories help sell the product.

It鈥檚 fair to say that your institution鈥檚 backstory won鈥檛 be reported on in anywhere near as much detail as that of Hollywood stars and movies. That鈥檚 why you have to pick up the slack on the entry form. If your staff count is significantly lower than your rivals鈥, mention it! If you have no budget and are innovating with what little you鈥檝e got, mention it!

Make sure to include the areas you鈥檝e improved on, and don鈥檛 be shy in saying how bad they used to be. If your student numbers have grown massively, then that鈥檚 great. But try to outline what was holding them back before. If your library received increased investment, then mention why it needed it. Not skirting around the bad can provide a jury with a compelling context around your improvements. It may feel counterproductive to badmouth your university when you鈥檙e right up to the word count, but people go wild for a good before/after juxtaposition. 

<榴莲视频>Read the statistics first

Treat your statistics with the respect they deserve. Don鈥檛 try to retrofit statistics to suit your narrative. Don鈥檛 try to shoehorn in nice stats if they aren鈥檛 relevant. Go out and collect your data properly. Read through it, understand it, find the story in that boring Excel document. Doing it the other way round is tantamount to cheating 鈥 and everyone can tell.

<榴莲视频>Work out how to refer to your team and your entry

So, you鈥檝e got the facts, you鈥檝e got the stats, your key stakeholders have bought into the story you鈥檙e telling across your entry 鈥 now it鈥檚 just about writing the whole thing down. There鈥檚 no one right way to do this, of course, but it鈥檚 important to give consideration to the language and tone you use. Using 鈥渨e鈥 can be a really powerful tool for a challenger brand, allowing them to tug at the heartstrings of a jury. After all, who doesn鈥檛 love the emotional pull of a journey? However, if you鈥檙e a brand at the top of the tree, talking in this way can come across as overfamiliar and the degree of formality that 鈥渋t鈥 brings could help take you further.

Sam Russell is a content executive at Arden University, UK.

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